if you were looking closely
you might have seen a tiny smile
trace the outline
of trembling lips
in that otherworldly glow
just beyond the crimson dying sun
...and if you opened your ears wider
you might have heard the faintest sigh
waft upward
amongst the stars
to hang on bended knee
beneath a shiny silvern moon
…and if you ask why the smile
i would simply walk away,
for what answer
could be given
when i see my own breath dancing
in a world apart from men
5 comments:
Nice poem Janice & no questions, because i understand that smile, perhaps more than you! :)
wishes,
devika
Such a poet!
Love this, Janice!
Margie :)
Oh my awe of you and treasures you share always leave me without breath...oh Janice
....Very...nice...and...so poetic. Beautiful..
Nice one. My wishes!
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